Thursday, May 8, 2008

Frozen Scene

by SL Ruth

Snow swirls silently
As I hesitate at the top
Of the ridge;
Pausing to absorb the splendor
Of the pristine and whitened world
Surrounding me.

Two magpies and three black crows
Perch atop tall trees
Like sentinals poised at Elysian gates;
Suddenly, as on timely cue, the magpies dive
From their obelisks, to hover
In the face of the glittered wind.

Both flail their wings, struggling
Then, deftly lift to the solitary peaks
Of two separate snow-laden evergreens;
The trees shudder, sifting
Off thin showers
Of crystal flakes.

The magpies ruffle their feathers
And settle in like the slick, black
Crows below them;
The image is frozen in my mind
And in my body through
Layers of thick insulation.

Snow envelops me
Hiding my skis, I lift them
Crunching the powder beneath;
My breath forms a hoary
Frost, like misted icing
Freezing my woolen mask.

I shift my weight with one last long
Survey of the scene
Cold permeates me;
I push off the edge of the world
And begin my own iced flight
Down the mountain.

4 comments:

S.L. Ruth, writer said...

this is so frustrating!!! I've edited twice & the correction appears on that page, but, not on the one for comment! readers: please remove the word cure & replace it with cue - sorry
SL Ruth

Lara said...

Mom, I think this is a great idea; a way to get to know one another through our thoughts.

You know I was never good at skiing, but "Frozen Scene" makes me want to try again. The thing I always loved about skiing was being outside. I love nature so much.

jdranes said...

Hey... this is Christina not Jon commenting. I dont know how to get off of his id. I love your imagery. Always like be able to feel and taste what it is like in the poem. I love lines 7-9, (posed or poised at Elysian gates? you did say comment) Lovely!

Vagabond Mother said...

I love how sharp and clear the world is that you create. I can "feel" so much in your words. Very direct and cool.

I haven't been skiing for about five years, but your poem takes me back to the top of the ski lift. I feel like I'm on top of a ski lift right now, the tense moments before change and adventure... and the unknown.

I hope you had a great Mother's Day. If you look on my blog links, under "Family," my mom just posted a poem she wrote. Her blog is under "Laurel."